for a text diss, the flow was off and shit didn't really work that well, you used multies in there but at places it didnt help, this diss works more as an audio diss the way it flows, which is probably what Ysdat did, so I'll look at this as the words for a potential audio diss and break it down....

the flow was nice, multies had good affect, punches were cool, the usage of large words was pretty irrelevant because it didnt really add to the diss, just made your rhyme scheme seem a little more complex, but i'll score it as....

for a text diss = 3/10
but,
for words to an audio diss = 6/10

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