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Old 12-14-05, 09:00 AM   #1
Dex
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looking from the office. -my first RV poem

IP:

its almost rusty looking filth on the window up here
a caterpillar wants to fly like the glass wants to be clear
there is one benefit that the glazing can boast
they can see for miles, almost to the coast
cars drive by like toys being pushed about
litterpickers stalk streets like aardvarks with a snout.
industrial areas, sites, buildings and yards
watching someone working reminds life is hard
shows you must be smart and keep life focussed
most of us wont find hapiness thru any hocus pocus
people be brewathing shit all day, not just smokers
think about it really, we're not different from locusts
just here to flitter about and get a job done
trying our utmost to find time for fun
but to some a little fun is never enough
to others 10 minutes enjoyment is far too much

little feedback would be greatly appreciated
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