Voted For: one mic
One Mic-Good flow through it.Not much of a story or anything.Nor anything really creative.Like the Delia Smith line.Overall,it was an above average verse,but the reason it's nothing spectacular was the originality IMO.But I liked your flow a lot.Kept consistant with it,didn't fall off once.Good job.
theblob-Wtf?,well...you started off OK,but then..the middle,from when you started talking about how your rushing your verse..well,that's where your verse fell off.Maybe you did that to try an put it in a comedic way or something?,but IMO,shit didn't work..
Vote-One Mic.
No hate to blob on this..
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