beat is familiar

ur vocals come in too loud...lower them pls...lol


and the way u have ur verse dubbed sounds like your buddy is in the background trying to rap with you = out of sync = not good

ur flow is really lazy...which isn't bad...but ur delivery isn't tight enough to pull that off in this song


ur rhyming is pretty decent


sounds like you were BSin though...


decent for what it was...However, I'd like to see a full song.


holla


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