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Old 12-14-05, 02:46 PM   #3
Blay'all
 
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Originally Posted by Tha Q.
beat is familiar

ur vocals come in too loud...lower them pls...lol


and the way u have ur verse dubbed sounds like your buddy is in the background trying to rap with you = out of sync = not good

ur flow is really lazy...which isn't bad...but ur delivery isn't tight enough to pull that off in this song


ur rhyming is pretty decent


sounds like you were BSin though...


decent for what it was...However, I'd like to see a full song.


holla


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word, i mean its 2 verses and a chorus....
which is what most people would do on a song if they have somebody featured

but yeah, thnx for the feed, and i AM still just gettin started on audio, only like my 3rd recorded track....... uppin
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