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Old 12-14-05, 08:13 PM   #4
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im feelin the beat

1st person ugh
@ your flow
its weird, all your words are kind of slowed
and its very choppy

2nd person
A SHITLOAD better, flow is much better and rides the beat much better. the chorus is AIIgh, not horrible, but not great
wow man, that Vibe guy sucked, but Doc trin you came aiigh on the track
you mos def outshined Vibe
I would like to hear some solo shit from you

anyway
overall, a below average track, the 1st guy was just horrible, lol
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