hotshh!
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Punching dope is simple to most people, I can too
N it's easy to Killa...kid in PLL that's as wack as you
is a decent punch here but the nameplay is basic
even worse is that the rhyme scheme is so simple which u usually accomodate for with a dope wordplay but here u used a statement as an opener and a killa play as your punch
Ya kin's nothing but failures,so let's hope your the last crop
cuz your family is full of more scrubs....than a craft shop
your punch is pretty good as well, using a family concept into a comparison punch
the rhyming was more than one syllable which is good, no real personal but then again this is Punch line league so it dont matter
^^^
*this is the most explained vote Im dropping this week*
v/ NK punch had more to it, good battle still
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