technique- ya shit was pretty good man. i liked a lot of your punchez, though some didnt really hit him that hard, but it was ok. some personalz, but not that amazing. good shit though.

devil- thiz verse was pretty bad. punches were blah, and the personalz you attempted were bad az well. work on making real punchez and not just random words meant to be a punch.

v- Ill if i could vote

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