ok ysdat....your quality was ass....I could barely make out ya words an that female sound effect of the chick moanign was dominating ya vocals as well making it even harder to hear what u said....ya flow wasn't bad jus lacked creativity..u took real simplistic approach..delivery cant judege couldn't make ya voice out too well...willa...u improving ma'....ya delivery was most animated I ever heard it...only thing was it didn't mesh wit this beat..u spit wit a club type delivery on a laidback sexy track....the punched in phrases like "pull ym hair" was a nice touch but again it was delivered wrong....it came across almost as if u was talking about it in a comical way instead of a sexy way....flow was koo but like ysdat lacked creativity but all in all good track...jus quality issues an emcee kill polishing needed which will both come in time...stay up....1

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