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Old 12-15-05, 08:42 AM   #29
Paranoid
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ysdat: I couldn't understand most of what you were saying. momotone and the quality is bad. flow I couldnt tell nore delivery couldnt understand you. nothin else to say cuz you didnt show up man. willa vocals are a lil to high, this is the type of track to be layed back and you put a lil to much emotion into it. your lyrics were a lil weak. flow was off in some spots but it was decent in others. delivery was a bit off as well. but overall I'd say this trak is aight but could use more work.
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