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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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aight peepin now.....the beats intro was kinda ehh sketchy......sounds like someone watching a t.v.......the first up......is good but the flow dont ride the beat right.....it dont sound round...its too robotic.....meeh.....its decent tho......but ya lyrics and ur pressense make up for that.........the hook is uhh kinda weird....a tv??? thats kinda weeird.....alllright second person....i like this more..ya flow was better and ur pressense was nice..u just gotta have better emotion and it'd be a lot better u'll get it over time tho.....sounds like its just gettin read of the paper..this is a alright trick tho...:7/10
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