you want to be champ,well try to stay straight.i know its hard being gay all da time
cause i dont want yo rhymes coming out "crooked",like sylvester stalones mouth line

WOW @ HOW STRETCHED THIS BAR IS...
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But,your punch was good.Nice similie.Just get rid of filler and shit.

Lay ya rhymes on the "STREET" cuz they cant stay up wit mines
Cuz you couldnt be "STRETCH" even wit your own whack lines

The fact that you had to explain it in order for people to understand it messed it up for you.You seem to have tried too hard to be complex.

v/Legend