Oh shit, damn the beat is raw as shit......

Q wit the chorus, tight message..

ight Q, wit the verse. Good mix between a quicker, more percise flow. Tight verse man, your message had noddin my head. There was only part I was concerned with, the "Still," the pause to me was too long, and threw the feeling of your verse off a little bit. But the shit was tight.

ight past tense comes in. Another good message, your flow was a little shakey at the beginning, but it seemed you got more confortable as it went on. Your style was a little simple, try to make it more complex by uppin your rhyme scheme. Overall good drop man.

This was a def download, good shit peeps. PSA fuckas....

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