Yo, lol at the sample at the beginning.....

Hahaha, almost forgot you was from UK. Ight MK comes in, work on your delievery is very simple, which makes your rhyming very simple. Overall, ok verse, but could have been a lot better. Just need practice. Also, up your quality, cause there's too much echo, it needs to sound more natural.

Hook is ok, but doesnt have a good transition from verse to chorus.
sounds like you need to turn vocals up.

Ight, next verse. Pretty simple, same as first. Just need to up your delievery and your rhyme scheme, because its very, very simple. Overall, decent track.

7/10

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