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Old 12-15-05, 02:40 PM   #17
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the beat is decent
your voice sounds kind of..hollow..
ehhh, Im startin to hear the accent more than before
hmm, lol, it sounds funny hearin you talk tough, cos you dont have tough soundin voice, really
the first verse was aiigh, nothin stood out at all to me.
the hook is decent, not bad at all
3nd verse is just like the 1st. you rode the beat well, but you said nothin that stood out.
keep elevatin as usual
pZ
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