heard beat before = pretty good


beat is loud, which means ur gonna have to amp ur vocals hella loud

vocals needs to be amped maybe 2 decibels

but ur flow is smooth and on beat...pretty good

lyrics...nothin too stand out-ish...not bad tho


delivery could be upped, as well as inflections in ur voice


Hook: needs to be amped...Panning the hook left and right woulda sounded tyte had I been able to hear what u were sayin


2nd cat...too much bass in his vocals...sounds like he's rappin too close to the mic

flow is pretty decent tho


not a bad track dawg, jus needs polish


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