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Old 12-15-05, 03:18 PM   #22
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beat is ALRIGHT
Nothin spectacular

intermental's verse
hmm, it sounds kinda like you whisper.
your flow is stalky, its not smooth enough, it could be alot smoother
also, when you do the chorus and you say "ITS.TIME.TO.BLOW.
Its kinda stalky..or choppy,
Ojay, likin his voice, no homo. he has more confidence
his flow is also smoother, ALOT better than Intermentals.
he also says the chorus better
intermenta;s verse again
flow is choppy as fuck
like after you say "diamond in the rough"
it kinda like where you start to fuck up
now, Intermental's chours, it sounds WAAY more smooth now :-\

hmm, overall, this was an aiigh track, but it would've been GOOD, if Intermentals was a bit more amp'd, and flowed better.
Ojay really outshined in this track
its all good
keep elevatin
pZ
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