ok, even though i was quite lost about the topic this was a nice piece. You had a very wide, colorful vocabulary and decent imagery. Emotion obviously wasnt very key to this piece but, it was a fun read anyway. Your structure was all over the place, it was readable however. Just try not to get mad stretched lines... its just less fun to read when its all over the place.

overall nice drop. 6/10

-thanks

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