typing as I listen....not feeling intro the "hahaha" is jus corny...quality needs work....first verse...opens wit good energy but it starts to whine down as it goes on..an the flow is repetitve...need to change hook....lyrics wasn't decent....hook is decent...it was mixed poorly...cant make out words...ok 2nd verse opens wit good energy again....but it lacks emotion...ya jus yelling instead of conveying a real emotion....need to work on effectively using influctions....flow on this verse was same as first...def showing great improvement...keep dropping man....1

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