Voted For: Young Un...

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Shit was basic...had a few good lines..you gotta up the vocab u had sum amusing punches...flow was good

Flow: 5/5
Structure: 4/5
Vocab: 1/5
Punches: 2/5
Funny: 3/5

Your wack you were good bck in the day its time to fucking retire
And its like Cs is like your verse the way theyre already expired
Your not sick and any who beleives it is a stupid ignorant fool
Cuz your faking ta sickness like a kid who dont wanna go 2 school

ure best bit...

yung

Structure was so over board it sucked so much lol..it was so hard to flow to it alot dawg cos it was so stretched so

structure :1/5
Flow: 2/5
Punches: 5/5
Vocab: 5/5
Funny: 4/5

lines were dope but stretched...u got this

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