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Old 12-16-05, 06:59 PM   #32
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Intro was a nice touch. First verse: It don't hurt tht I'm high as hell listening to this. First verse, the flow is nice. Different for a change and I still like it. Told a micro-story in the verse. Hook was cool.

Second verse, comin in WAY too high energy for a high track man. That thta coke shit or something. Flow works well and the delivery's good. Nice multies and fade out into the hook. Cooled down from that high speed shit at the intro which was just not the right place.

third verse, mic has a ratty sound to it. Nice flow. Voice reminds me a little bit of my boy Mobb. Nice juggling and multies through out and nice ender. The hook has a rush delivery on "fire like" at the very end of it. Pretty good track overall. There's tracks like this on the radio already, so why not?
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