All these Dead Presidents
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This piece is ok.. The best thing about this was your vocabulary. It was colorful and big. I didnt feel the whole meaning of this piece. Its not that I didnt feel it but, I didnt really understand what you were getting at here. Really was no imagery in this piece. However you did have good emotion into this. That was the best aspect along w/ the vocabulary.
Keep working at it and hope to see pieces from you in the future.
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