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Nick Fletcher ok fletch thanks for the critique but i dropped a little taste of this in your thread i can you don' tlike it but yo dawg that piece in your thread shows i have vocab if I choose to use so the elevation factor maybe revresed holla back dawg



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11-04-05, 03:13 PM #17
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Dang Yall I Really Appreciate The Props For Real Yall

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12-10-05, 04:01 PM #18
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there are a few haterz man but i thought tht was madd as fuck. Good rhymes and muties. Funny, if someone thinks its a little basic fair enough but i think it was superior to a lot of the other shit on this site.

keep up the good work bro, that was funny as hell, sick entertaining too




how much did you pay him to toot your horn gladbag? Your whack end of storie I'd battle you but even when i win it wouldnt be an accompishment.
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12-10-05, 06:11 PM #19
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LexiKon you talk too much i'm gonna diss you and watch you become a damn cry baby like all these otherf overrated cats

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12-10-05, 07:08 PM #20
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im sorry, this was the worst attempt at rapping i've ever read...
it was terrible. the rhymes were completely random...

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Another hit brothers can spit like I do and when Ice Cube
Is not a nice dude I get my AK and walk away after I heist his food?



wtf is that? how is that a question????????????

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12-11-05, 12:48 AM #21
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stuff was on the money hey if you can't write rap how the hell you can understand it? ask that question to yourself but anyway thanks for responding

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12-11-05, 01:14 AM #22
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LexiKon you talk too much i'm gonna diss you and watch you become a damn cry baby like all these otherf overrated cats



Please it would make my day!
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12-11-05, 05:06 PM #23
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thashit was there and cats like MENTALZ AND LEXICON DON'T LIKE THIS WHY?

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12-11-05, 07:34 PM #24
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its realli interesting spit...like how u get da mainstream rappers name in it to...could be hotter but...good shit
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here's one link damnit ill get more no stop closin my shit ty
12-11-05, 08:17 PM #25
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here's one link damnit ill get more no stop closin my shit ty

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ayt ima put it like dis on sum real shit personally i kno eminem,proof from d12 adn ludacris through 1 of my ex g/f's i showed them sum of my shit when i first started rhymin n proof told me this"alot niggaz tryin 2 copy eminem flow n style but come whack but u my nigga did the shit rite n mixed wit ur own style n flow n em n luda jus said keep it up n one day i'll b on stage wit them some day......flow was ok was a lil 2 long in parts certain parts made no if little sense use bigger words,punchlines,vocab overall n multies u wanna win u gotta keep at it n w/e u cant make u take kno wut im sayin dats how ya do in da hood but keep postin n practicin cuz like 1 of my drops in here way back when i was flowin under my alias raw killa i had a joint called practice makes perfect...you'll probly find it in the archive's but ne ways stay up homie n dont let this bitch ass haters on here stop u from doin ya thang hollahttp://community.rapverse.com/showpost.php?p=2572148&postcount=25

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12-11-05, 10:55 PM #26
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Quote:
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thashit was there and cats like MENTALZ AND LEXICON DON'T LIKE THIS WHY?



Fuck you spell my name right you little bitch and set that fuckin battle up I'm clappin you
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12-14-05, 08:53 PM #27
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this shit was on th emoney fro real yo

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12-14-05, 08:59 PM #28
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gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay as a flower bed.
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12-14-05, 10:09 PM #29
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This Isn't Even Close To Being Like Eminem.......It Had A Series Of Run On Sentences......
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yall got to be honest with your selves don't make a fool out of your own whack brain