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Old 12-17-05, 11:53 AM   #6
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Voted For: Apostrophe

Sit back while i test the water on this fruit making his melon swell
Showin crews i aint gotta be smokin 2 blunts to be blazin a double L
...The whole L/blunt idea is played.
Your spektacular end like Empires that didnt take Moses's signs serious
Disrepect the all whats apostrophe,Changin and bringin dis battle to a period
....Weak,and this bar was kinda stretched out too
Sure look gangsta in ya sig,fitted cap and shades like ya ready to slang coke
But you gon have me and RV laughing when all your crack comes up jokes
...Wtf @ the first line
Try to illustrate the hustler image,need to take that anime shit back to the nation
Cuz you color outside the thug lines gon have to make me use punch-U-asian (punctuation)
...Forced.It's pronounced more like PUNk-CHEW-ASIAN,not Punch-U-Asian..wordplay has to be homophonic or else it's forced.
To put this to a stop, false usin zip-lock,the rap game you try to lock it
While I lock it like old school gameboy catriges off up in my pocket
...Good
Legends suppose to be establishish,No be known for great and legendary keystyle
But yet ya crew was one of the last if ever to step to being bitched by E-Style
....Good personal,but the 1st line was stretched
Excuses being like its about respect for line in they time, but in your mind
Your lyricaly behind,not even for the fact my rhyme steady sinks you in your seat
Like a broken recline,Admit ya creative bringin personafaction to a finger key sweep
...Blah,boring...

Your Just A Dummy With A Mic, && Its Funny Cuz I'm Right
Dolla? Please, He Won't Have That Much Money In His Life
...Liked the multis,punch was a little iffy tho
Dawg, Your Verse Is Weak, No One Will Be Stealing It..
My Punchs'll Crack Your Jaw So Much
........................................DrugLords Will Be Dealing It
....decent
Dont Get Bent, My Punches Leave Yah Cranium Full Of Dents..
Kid's Only Young Dolla.. Cause his Rhymes Dont Make Cents
...Good
I'm Rich Kid, You Cant Even Count The Money I've Spent..
I'd Have No Problem Ripping Dolla, Even Though
.................................................. .Its A Federal Offense
...Wasn't feelin all the dots,but a good punch.
Not Trying To Get Cocky, But Dolla Im Sayin Ur Beat..
Cause U Get Hit More Then Blind Kids Playing In Streets..
..Played,way too many blind kid lines.

Ok,I gotta give this battle to apostrophe..
I expected better from young dollar in this battle.For one,his shit was stretched.His lines are waay too long for the rhyme scheme that he uses.And a lot of punches were weak.Like the forced wordplay,where he tried to make punctuation into punch-u-asian.That shit doesn't work...

Vote-Apostrophe

Drop an honest vote in the link below plz.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213623
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