listening...

flow is on beat...try not taking so many pauses is the only complaint i have there...

delivery is definitely getting better...your spitting with a lot more emotion and your delivery is a lot more exciting...

hook is ok....

2nd verse is better as far as the pauses....


id say get a new mic man...your getting a lot better quickly.....if your quality was better...itd only make it that much better....

work on those pauses.....and other than that your doing well....

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