Voted For: Young Un...

My rhymes are drastic , your punches are fake like Plastic
Some1 said your audio was dope and u knew he was sarcastic(his sig)
...good
This dude has no brains and hes losing like a retard playing chess
And your rhymes are like your verse , long and just plain pointless
....wack
Im not on your level ha your funny but i guess its kinda true
Only if u warnt counting the 8658890 people that are above you
...corny,sounds like something a lil kid would write
Your wack you were good bck in the day its time to fucking retire
And its like Cs is like your verse the way theyre already expired
...ehh,your wording was bad,
Your not sick and any who beleives it is a stupid ignorant fool
Cuz your faking ta sickness like a kid who dont wanna go 2 school
...REALLY played

Have U Layed-Down-To-Rest My Game-Is-The-Best Ur Life Gets Slated-With-Techs..
And I Hope U Have 'Wesley Snipes In Ya Heart' Cause Imma Put A 'Blade'-In-Ya-Chest..!!
...Good
Im Impailing-The-Fifth..Roam The Streets With The Mac-And-The-Inf..Rap-Up-This-Shit..
I Aint Into 'Scary Movies' Dawg So I Heard Enough Tales-From-This-Crypt (Crip)..!!
...Ok
I Onli Play-With-This-Text..Allow Me Just To Say Whos-The-Best..Im The Greatest-No-Stress..
And Wen Im Spraying-The-Tech I'll Leave A 'Shell In Ya Ass' Like U Laying-An-Egg..!!
..Too gorish for my liking
Just Take This Loss-Kid My Guns 'Spray' Like A-Faucet Im Ill I Don’t Force-It..Not-Often..
U Distraught-Bitch..How Is U Gangsta Wen U Stay On The 'Net Longer' Than A Caught-Fish..!!
...Played
Xcelent U Shuld Pick-Ya-Casket This Shit-Is-Drastic Distraught-Action Wen U Rapped-In-Plastic..
Convict-This-Bastard..N 'Pierce Ya Chest' Like Wearin Paul's-Jersey-Backwords
...Good..

Ok,Young UN.. got this.
X.Celent..
your wording sucked in this battle,and it messed up some lines..like the C.S one.And the kids.illness.school line is played out.So work on wording and creativity.

V/Young Un..

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