You have a good rhyme scheme but this seems to make your actual punches lack impact. The punches I thought were strongest were played concepts. I mean I thought you had a decent flip but line such as:

I Onli Play-With-This-Text..Allow Me Just To Say Whos-The-Best..Im The Greatest-No-Stress..
And Wen Im Spraying-The-Tech I'll Leave A 'Shell In Ya Ass' Like U Laying-An-Egg..!!
Just Take This Loss-Kid My Guns 'Spray' Like A-Faucet Im Ill I Don’t Force-It..Not-Often..
U Distraught-Bitch..How Is U Gangsta Wen U Stay On The 'Net Longer' Than A Caught-Fish..!!

.. Have been done before. You have a nice rhyme scheme but I though your actual punches lacked originality.