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Old 12-17-05, 06:51 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by X.celent

My rhymes are drastic , your punches are fake like Plastic
Some1 said your audio was dope and u knew he was sarcastic(his sig)
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This dude has no brains and hes losing like a retard playing chess
And your rhymes are like your verse , long and just plain pointless
Im not on your level ha your funny but i guess its kinda true
Only if u warnt counting the 8658890 people that are above you
Your wack you were good bck in the day its time to fucking retire
And its like Cs is like your verse the way theyre already expired
Your not sick and any who beleives it is a stupid ignorant fool
Cuz your faking ta sickness like a kid who dont wanna go 2 school


There was nothing here that took me. I mean the rhyme scheme was basic & your punches were not witty, original nor powerful. Overall too basic, just making statements that lacked much skill.

V/ Young Un

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