yesh... the pimple line was funny. i wasnt really feelin tha beat tho, i guess thats not important. Fux, i been tellin you since day one to work on ya flow a lil mayne, yo got tha nice rizzyhmes but ya flow is lackin at some points.
"knocked and locked in tha lockers in school"
omg that was funny!
good shit, just work on tha flow like i said, i liked tha multies tho. that bare-ly thing was nice, just be sure to get it soundin right. i understand what type of rhyme u was gettin at...
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