YOUR VOCALS ARE TO FUCKING LOUD!!!!!!
.And your lyrics are decent...except for the daydream/night mare shit..I heard the same shit from NAs.But then again,your Will.Sun..I can't expect originality from you .
And ur delivery sounded wackk..
But really tho,I think ya got a vioce for a rapping.It's somewhat similar to Big L in my opinion..

So,yea...