Sounds liek you're using the default sound-sets which means that all the beats sound like gameboy beats. The assembly is good, but the default tones blow. Remember that Fruity Loops was originally designed to make videogame beats and tones for cellphones and shit liek that, so if you want to make music that's actually listenable, you gotta get other soundsets, sample, or drop FL completely.





You still sound exactly like Carson. Flow, delivery, lyrics, even your voice. You should stop rapping for about a month so you don't have this pre-conception of what your style is and jsut re-invent your self. Qual's good, but marketability wise, nah. No energy (which dosen't mean shouting), no cadence and a 1-syl rhymescheme. Old. House of Pain style. BTW, you need to do a lot more solo songs because it makes you look like you have a REAL low writing out-put or are just lazy.




For starters, it sounds like you've got a ferocious lisp. Your flow is texty, like your lyrics are there but your delivery is flat as shit like you're always depressed, even when you're amped. Your vocals have no mood at all, which makes you sound soul-less no matter what you're saying. Get drunk some time and record, you'll see wht emotion in lyrics should sound like. Your flow goes off at times. I don't gotta tell you that your quality is against the ropes and your mic is boo-T. Sounds like you got an accent on your R's and a's wich throws me off sometimes. Just dosen't sound liek you're agile while spittin yet, sounds liek you're tripping over your tongue. You need more time to solidify on your flow and learning to EQ wouldn't hurt you either so you can get some more body out of your mic. Get a pop filter, because your music is useless without it.




Your beats all sound hurt as hell to and it's because you're not using hip-hop instruments at all, you're using techno and D&B instruments and trying to use them in a hip-hop way. Those sounds are cool and all, but remember that the original music it came out of has about 12-20 different sounds all going on at once and the pace is high, so the music sounds a lot thicker. On your slower hip-hop beats with way less sounds, it sounds empty and boring. They also lack any flare and in most cases, a hook.

Your rhymes are okay. You're bout where I'd expect an average person to be, you just need more time to polish off because your flow is rushed sometimes. I'd say about 1/3rd the time from what I've seen. Just do more flow checking, because if you think you sound off beat, you do.

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