Hook-Ok,but not all that catchy and shit.Seemed half assed.Like nobody put any thought into it.
And your flow was on the beat.But it was simple.You had that "stop and go" flow.Nothing really special about that.And your lyrics were the biggest problem.You tried to include some wordplay in there,but it was all basic and done before.Like,take more shots than white girls,shit is played.All you spoke about was guns,sex,murder..shit is played.

Upp your creativity..