Once again,seems like you half assed the hook,and put no thought into it..
I liked the lyrics in this song a LITTLE more than the other one.But still,you sound mainstream with your lryics...Like,this track is something I could hear cam'ron or juelz santana spitting on the radio.And if your a fan of that kinda shit,well..then it's good for you..But In my opinion,I hate that..
I think maybe you should switch up ya flow or something..

So..yea..decent track..better than the other one....
And for your 1st song,this is really good.
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