its ight...the beat is ehhh not the best...the flow is good doesnt really lose its flow...delivery could be better make sure ta add more emotion and switch up ur vioce a lil more...the girl singing aint horrible but aint no talented singer niether she was ight..the quality was ight aint studio work but aint that bad...ehhh i wasnt totally feeling this but it was a good attempt...i'd give this a 6.5/10 the most...but dont let this feedback discourage u, keep at it dawg