Voted For: Ysdat

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dopium
flow was bad in spots realllllllllllllly long lines lol
structure would have looked better centered with smaller lines
creativity was loooooooow nothing was creative in this most creative line was santas demise ur last night besides that u didnt go in depth at all everything was predictable
overall jsut about every part needed elevation stick to writing poems maybe you need to be creative

ysdat
flwo was off in a few spots a few stretched lines but alot of them i could flow to a beat lol
structure i liked that u centered it i liek ur lines not being as stretched as dopiums
lyriccs were creative i liked the prayers alot of multis loved is vocab was pretty good not overdone the ending with his mom was kind of predictable but u took a creative side with this i was like yea hes going to find a shit load of presents and he didnt lol i was like wtf you not only told about a childs dissapointment you told about his faith and his poverty props cool shit
easy win for ysdat his creativity won me over

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