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Old 12-18-05, 11:59 PM   #8
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Voted For: Young Dollar

Your spektacular end like Empires that didnt take Moses's signs serious
Disrepect the all whats apostrophe,Changin and bringin dis battle to a period
To put this to a stop, false usin zip-lock,the rap game you try to lock it
While I lock it like old school gameboy catriges off up in my pocket
Your lyricaly behind,not even for the fact my rhyme steady sinks you in your seat
Like a broken recline,Admit ya creative bringin personafaction to a finger key sweep

Young Dolla had some concepts.. some executed nicely some failed.. overall decent verse.. i almost quoted the opener


Dawg, Your Verse Is Weak, No One Will Be Stealing It..
My Punchs'll Crack Your Jaw So Much
........................................DrugLords Will Be Dealing It
Dont Get Bent, My Punches Leave Yah Cranium Full Of Dents..
Kid's Only Young Dolla.. Cause his Rhymes Dont Make Cents

apostrophe woulda won if he worded the federal offense line better.. young wins by a hair.
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