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Old 12-19-05, 01:44 AM   #7
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ok
sample is playin
its so beautiful, its bringin a tear to me eye

Q comes on
nice ass verse, I even rewinded it and listened to it again
dope delivery, I like the
"Back then the black kid was a bastard
but the game scouped me up and made me proud kid"

chorus
its aiigh, not smooth enough, it would've been better if it was smoother

that nigga's verse
lyrics was good. Addlibs was done poorly, they could've been better..or mixed better. too many "yeah" at random ass spots. They stick out cos they too loud.
the "get put on lyrical probation" line stuck out like a sore thumb. When I heard that I was like "ha, this nigga is just rhymin" but it was a pretty solid verse.
overall, not a bad song at all, I just wish the chorus was more smooth.
Maybe if Q would've said it, it would've sounded better, cos That Nigga made it sound kind of choppy
but, like I said, nice song
pZ
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