Originally Posted by Apexx

For starters, it sounds like you've got a ferocious lisp. Your flow is texty, like your lyrics are there but your delivery is flat as shit like you're always depressed, even when you're amped. Your vocals have no mood at all, which makes you sound soul-less no matter what you're saying. Get drunk some time and record, you'll see wht emotion in lyrics should sound like. Your flow goes off at times. I don't gotta tell you that your quality is against the ropes and your mic is boo-T. Sounds like you got an accent on your R's and a's wich throws me off sometimes. Just dosen't sound liek you're agile while spittin yet, sounds liek you're tripping over your tongue. You need more time to solidify on your flow and learning to EQ wouldn't hurt you either so you can get some more body out of your mic. Get a pop filter, because your music is useless without it.