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Old 12-19-05, 08:05 AM   #6
Tha Q.
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the hook is rapped well....but u can up ur "cockiness" on track...u sound like a kid a little bit...u might be young, but u can still come hard with the delivery

singin wasn't too bad


but...I'm bout ready for the verses...mmmmhmmmm


ur flow isn't bad...but ur lyrics are mad simple

up complexity

and ur delivery becomes repetitive after a while

u got potential dawg

keep droppin


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