listenin..beat is koo..first dude quality sucks...voice is koo..but u gotta keep it on the mic..and not swayin away from it..try compressin it..lyrics are kooo, flow is off alot..it has a pattern but its the wrong pattern..work on the breath a lil too..flow gets better....lol at the gurl on the hook i can tell its her first time..mad knizzle comes on flows better...energetic now..lyrics are good..gotta get a pop filter..quality sucks unfortunately...this is better fo u..but i dont like the pops..man that hooks hurtin me lol...

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