some jarring lyrics

I like that...just the way art should be

And...sometimes people say things JUST to shock you...With you, CHO, it's completely believeable...You just don't know if it's true or not what you say, but I can buy it...that = a great quality...a quality rhyme scheme...pretty coo quality...nothing really wrong here...perhaps vary that delivery some more...use more inflections (varying the pitch) in your voice.

I like the fact that both of you spit on the hook


the other cat fit the track well...quality flow...nothin major one way or the other


jus a str8 track


good one


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