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Old 12-19-05, 06:47 PM   #21
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This was feedback posted for Young Un...

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Young's verse was full of good multies and some dope word play, but your lines were too stretched. i was feeling X's verse better it had harder punches strtucutre was better and
not to mention shorter lines.young yo punches aint hit so hard. v/ X.cellent
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