Semper Fi
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IP:
Voted For: Young Un...
Young Un
Have U Layed-Down-To-Rest My Game-Is-The-Best Ur Life Gets Slated-With-Techs..
And I Hope U Have 'Wesley Snipes In Ya Heart' Cause Imma Put A 'Blade'-In-Ya-Chest..!!
Nice line......................................Not da best but nice
Im Impailing-The-Fifth..Roam The Streets With The Mac-And-The-Inf..Rap-Up-This-Shit..
I Aint Into 'Scary Movies' Dawg So I Heard Enough Tales-From-This-Crypt (Crip)..!!
Nice line.............brought back memories but the multies are killin it
I Onli Play-With-This-Text..Allow Me Just To Say Whos-The-Best..Im The Greatest-No-Stress..
Nice glorification multie
And Wen Im Spraying-The-Tech I'll Leave A 'Shell In Ya Ass' Like U Laying-An-Egg..!!
kinda funny but i didnt see a rhyme and it definetly didnt rhyme wit da next line
Just Take This Loss-Kid My Guns 'Spray' Like A-Faucet Im Ill I Don’t Force-It..Not-Often..
Nice multie and slight use of word play
U Distraught-Bitch..How Is U Gangsta Wen U Stay On The 'Net Longer' Than A Caught-Fish..!!
Xcelent U Shuld Pick-Ya-Casket This Shit-Is-Drastic Distraught-Action Wen U Rapped-In-Plastic..
nice punch.............definetly feelin da first line
Convict-This-Bastard..N 'Pierce Ya Chest' Like Wearin Paul's-Jersey-Backwords
Again with multies. You hittin on point wit em
X.celent
My rhymes are drastic , your punches are fake like Plastic
Some1 said your audio was dope and u knew he was sarcastic(his sig)
Medicore but a good personal
This dude has no brains and hes losing like a retard playing chess
And your rhymes are like your verse , long and just plain pointless
Punch seems forced....i do it at times too
Im not on your level ha your funny but i guess its kinda true
Only if u warnt counting the 8658890 people that are above you
Not feeling this line all too good....aint hittin hard
Your wack you were good bck in the day its time to fucking retire
And its like Cs is like your verse the way theyre already expired
seems like a filler but still not feelin this line....aint hittin hard
Your not sick and any who beleives it is a stupid ignorant fool
Cuz your faking ta sickness like a kid who dont wanna go 2 school
nice concept just bad follow through....
Final Opinion-Young Un had some nice punches that were pulled threw by some good use of multies which i believed won it for him and he kept it on a constant level. X.celent has some good personals but the punches wasn't hitting hard which i thought was his downfall
Advice- Keep elevatin Young Un keep doing your thang and dont let advice and complements stop you from bettering yourself. X.celent keep elevating like us all and work on ya punches I guess..Good job to the both of you
Final Judgement- Young Un V/
P.S. RTF by voting on my battle link in my sig with Apostrophe. The battle is in need of votes.
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Project List
The Classick Mixtape Vol (8/18)
Age Of Consent Mixtape Vol 1(16/16)
The Classick Album(2/16)
S&S Express E.P.(1/10)
Lot of back to back shit. Stay tuned.
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