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Old 12-20-05, 07:07 PM   #4
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Seriously.. no. I ain't got no link to Mim but he would eat you the fuck up if this is your best. You used two styles in this verse which were played or shite. I mean.. wtf these lines are played & flipped BADLY:

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Originally Posted by MeTaFo'

And Mim aint about to give up...Until his salad is tossed..
I swear hes my stalker, Cant get enough of this slick talker..
Dude couldnt bring the force if he made love to luke skywalker
Always callin me whack, Wont take it back...even after he duck
an each verse, no matter if its rehearsed are lollipops
.................................................. ...cause they always suck


lollipops don't suck dood, they get sucked. You could of at least flipped that played line to make sense.

Similarly poo is the line about luke skywalker. You attempt to you wordplay but why would making love to L.S. 'bring the force', that is just gay stuff.
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