Voted For: Past Tense

UNF
man like I couldn't listen to that whole song...you use to many filler punches. they just aint finished and like fi you didn't post your lrycis I wouldn't ahve unserstood what you were sayin. your voice isn't clear you rush your voice to much. your voice sounds to fake and wannabe soundin gangsta. be yourself on the mic man. learn how to finish punchlines.

Past Tense
not bad man, only thing you could have done was finish the rest of the beat you had like 40 secs almost left. then the closer came up. and lmfao @ the closer its funny...ron weisly or w/e hahaha....hilarious just make that verse longer and well your punchlines and shit was way ebtter more personals and it sounded like you actually dissed him.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216818

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