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Old 12-21-05, 10:27 AM   #16
noname
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Voted For: illmatico

You talkin crazy like a bitch from da ice age, trappin../
Being 1 with da mic neva was meant for upstage rappin/
...seemed like you forced this multi.What relevance does the word "trappin" have?
This bitch is a never was, M.A.F.i.A made that happen/
Destroyed this fucken has-been with my mind n my black pen .. /
...2nd line was a little stretched.Decent punch though
Run you down with my lines, neglectin the fucken traction/
AFter im done with ya, ill watch you rot and dissipate/
Leave u with nothin but your own death t' anticipate/
....Ehh,generic
I punch with nothin but iron fists and vocals/
K.O-in Big Ls, spittin with poison mists and chokholds/
....Decent

Ya "drug trade" is messed up and im here for collection
now ya punches sufferering because I missing the "connection"
...Ok,a little forced.
I'm comin up in the polls because im droppin a lame
ya gettin played like people who payed for that M.A.F.i.A game
....Good
You a waste of space rappin cuz its skills you lack
I'd put out a "hit" for you but you already "wacked"
....Played,
Not worthy for touchin my frame, all of ya punches i deflect
You could live up to ya name but a M.A.F.i.A requires respect
.....Nice
You deserve an Herb Award and get served a certificate
but from ya name on the paper you tellin us "i." is insignificant
....Good

ok,one sided battle..
MAfia,you need elevating.First off,don't force your multis.Like in your first line,the trappin part had nothing to do with the rest of the line.You just put the shit there to rhyme with rappin.And that's not something you can do...And you need better punches..

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216400
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