Voted For: Paranoid

I like the fact that this is a topical battle:

paranoid...im feelin the beat choice..flow is kl throughout the track..it seems a lil robotic sumtimes n u stutter a lil..i see u workin on that emotion its nice....lyrics are very very nice...flow stays nice..however like i said its a bit robotic...but its comin dawg def a improvement since last time...hook is very nice ure best bit of the track..last verse...u shud write to add more words in each line cos its like u say summin n stop and continue..u dont wana do that alot..3rd verse is a bit better...

Rev:

listenin..lol ure voice sounds like sum american preacher from the suburbans..lol im playin..quality lets u down a huge amount..
lyrics are nice..i like the emotion..u got th energy but it seems ure emotion gettin over ure flow cos its off...presence is aitie...lyrics are koo u wrote better to it but it didnt flow..beat is was koo..lyrics koo..flow was offf...work on it cuz it was a decent listen..

v/paranoid...

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