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Old 12-21-05, 08:04 PM   #39
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Voted For: Natural killa

nk
Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words,
ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs
....Weak...........
A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice
...Nice Personal and Good Wordplay...
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
....Funny But A Lil Weak But hitz...
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED
.....Im Guesiin Thats The Name of The account?....Nice personal and wordplay again I Like this bar...
So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst,
And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse
.....Weak.....

Overall You had some good wordplay and personals which were set up pretty nicely I like the fact that you actually didnt boost yourself up you stuck to all disses which was nice so Im giving you my v/

G

Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"...
.....Weakk.....
When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
....Played Like Hell....
All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition...
Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician...
...Better Still Weakk...
Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby...
Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby...
......Better and Nice Set up and Wordplay....
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED
First Line was str8 2nd line'z concept was played so that kinda brought that bar down...

Overall i think that you came kinda weak considering the fact that you really couldnt set up your pucnhez rii and you used some played lines (no offense) but some of them were just reused concepts so that was kinda weak comin from somebody with 49 wins so srry I coudnt give you my v in this battle

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