ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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listening to "put'em up".... yo, non.... yeah, ya really need to fix that pop on da mic.... them p's are coming in strong ass hell.... whoa.... beat just stops! no fade out?.... verse too short.... ya got some skills but lemme see if you can maintain that throughout a whole joint, nah mean? make ya verses longer... soon as i start to get into it it cuts off...
listening to "rumble young man".... yeah.... this style fits you a lot better and that beat is hot...same thing though.... too short... abrupt ending.... we can work on that... gotta get a collab or sumn going so we can see how ya handle yaself in a group effort... and definitely up ya vocals and work on ya mixing cuz that abrupt ending is a killer for ya...lol....and please.....pleeease...make some longer verses.....lol....we'll holla
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