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Old 12-22-05, 03:21 PM   #16
Paranoid
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yo para... yeah, liketito said... ya got potential but it sounds like ya reading off da page, man.... ya flow gotta be buttaz when ya droppin.... each werd seems choppy ...almost like ya trying too hard to match the beat.... no energy.... but i see where you can improve ....and being around kats that got flow down is only gonna help you advance.... aiight tito.... it's on y'all.... i think he can be helped with that part and could end up being pretty nice ... good mic presence... levels seem aiight.... just that flow is killing him.... holla

yea I do read off my screen. I'm not good at remembering my lyrics man, not at all.
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